You are standing in a meadow,
it is lush green,
the kind people talk about
from the other side.
Life swells in pockets;
a city of daisies,
a bumblebee filling it’s knees,
tall tulips swaying in the breeze,
a buried village in the undergrowth
ants, woodlice and centipedes.
Sunshine weighs heavy
on your back,
on your shoulders,
your eyes water
and you cannot understand
what has brought you here;
to the edge of life in colour,
swimming in jewelled flowers,
the taste of pollen on your lips,
petals embracing the sun
the smell of hope –
poisonous joy.
You could step forward,
bare foot, unguarded
risking your soul for a chance
to choose the flowers
you adorn your home with.
Behind you is a forest,
shadowy fingers lingering
about your waist
stretching toward your throat,
to regain a firm hold
on your senses and pull
you into the shade.
Life thrives here too, but unseen;
amber eyes becoming accustomed
to the night sky,
families burrow in the roots of great oaks,
hedgehogs find homes in autumn debris,
birds call and mate in the trees,
in the dust of your footsteps.
When you began, it was a stroll,
an amble into the unknown.
It grew dark with heavy boughs
as heavy as your chest,
threatening to end all light,
snuff out the life
under your collarbone.
At times you walked through clearings
and on the trees you saw her face,
theirs and mine
but never yours.
Now you’re here, still standing
in a meadow
wondering what brought you
to this quiet place.
In the blue sky
there is the reflection of a man
beckoning you forward.
He is kind,
he dreams in orange and purple,
he believes in love,
he has led you here
past our faces embedded in bark
to see yours, for once,
in the blinding sun.
Kristiana Reed day dreams, people watches in coffee shops, teaches English and writes. She is a curator on Blood into Ink, a collective member of The Whisper and the Roar and blogs at My Screaming Twenties. She is 24 and is enjoying the journey which is finding her voice.
What a gorgeous piece Kristiana!!
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Thank you Aurora xx
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Reblogged this on S. K. Nicholas.
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This is so beautiful. A dream. A vision. A place I wish to be x
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Thank you so much S.K! 💛
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Beautiful intertwining of nature and threat. Enthralled by the intricacies of the words.
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Thank you 💛
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Reblogged this on erichmichaels and commented:
A Meadow by Kristiana Reed at Sudden Denouement. This is so mesmerizingly beautiful! I need an audio version of this on loop, so I can play it when go to sleep…oh the dreams that will come!
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Thank you so so much! What a wonderful comment ☺️
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You’re very welcome, Kristiana! 🙂
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A pleasure to read, as always.
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Thank you Sarah 💛
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Beautiful imagery.
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Thank you ☺️
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Amazing! And Wow, I love this word collection:
“the smell of hope –
poisonous joy.”
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Thank you Eric! ☺️
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To the edge of life in colour
How absolutely beautiful. The entire piece is beautiful. Well done.
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Oh thank you so much Nicole 💛
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Ah, that moment when you think ‘I could take a step forward, barefoot’, but the forest is always behind you…
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I know, I wanted to capture ‘that’ moment 💛
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You succeeded!
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entrancing, ethereal, gorgeous. This is fantastico! AN afterlife story in poetry?!! A dream? Bravo Kris!!
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Oh OP! Thank you for your kindness 💛 means the world
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My honour Kristiana, you are a beautiful soul🙏
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Reblogged this on RamJet Poetry.
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Kristiana- this is so mesmerizing and evocative! The scene is beautifully, and at times ominously, described. I loved the way it unfolded and would have kept following you where ever it led.
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Thank you, thank you 💛 so pleased it has had such a positive response and you were with me the entire way!
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Reblogged this on Brave & Reckless and commented:
Gorgeous writing from Kristiana Reed on Sudden Denouement.
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I don’t know why but this made me think of Ophelia. Beautiful writing, so romantic. ❤
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Aw thank you very much Henna ❤
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This touched me. Amazing piece of writing.
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Thank you so much Jasper! ☺️
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i enjoy a little fantasy here and there. 🖤
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Aw Sam, I’m glad you liked it ☺️ Thank you.
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WOW! Kristiana, this is absolutely stunning. I never wanted it to end. ❤
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Ohh Kindra 💛 thank you so much, means the world to hear such lovely things! x
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xo ❤ You're so welcome!
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Wow this is so beautiful and lovely.
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Thank you Daffni 💛
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Reblogged this on My Screaming Twenties.
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Quite some take. Exquisitely rich.
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Thank you so much 💛
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Reblogged this on FVR Publishing and commented:
Kristiana Reed wows today on SD ❤
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Oh man. OH MAN. This is poetry. And probably my new fave from you. The rhythm and word choice is wonderful.
❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so so much! 💛
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