Yes
I’m uneducated
punktuated by subversion
My verses run grades in reverse
I see only art in my continuum
I am averse to your curriculum
There’s no path for me in math
No rhythm in my algorithm
No symmetry in my poetry
I bastardize
established linguistics
I do it
Just to smite the elitist erudite
My philosophy is detached from your morphology
My beleaguered elocution
poisons Ivy league institutions
I am an alumnus
from the college of sacrilege
This is the narrative of a native
in class with the iconoclasts
We block the conjecture
I put a sock in the lecturer; Leave ’em annoyed
As i rock to the literature of pink floyd
I’m tryin’ to hold this mic, but my fingers keep slippin’
like Sigmund Freud
[ A.G. Diedericks: “write what you know” are the four most soporific
words I’ve ever heard. I am a divergent writer who couldn’t give 2
fucks about striving to be the best. To write only what you know, is
to play it safe. Art is imaginative rebellion. I am engaged with the
versatile risk takers, the ones who are not afraid to take their shoes
off & get dirty. I write & curate atMorality Park,”]
omg this is great
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Coming from an MC? I’m honoured.
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no coming from Frida kahlo
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Ha! Then its an even bigger compliment.
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Totally agree with the write what you know schtick…it should be imaginative rebellion. Nice one
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Because i know that you’re well-versed in the art of literature, this means a lot. Thank you, Mr Cake.
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My pleasure, I love your aesthetic!
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Poetry with an attitude! yay! I loved it!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you, Sir Orville.
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Punk rock rebellion poetry! Outstanding AG
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I know I’ve won when I receive the punk rock seal of approval! Thank you, my friend!
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Reblogged this on RamJet Poetry.
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Thanks again
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Reblogged this on Kindra M. Austin and commented:
A.G. dropping the mic is invigorating. Love ya, home fries. ❤
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I hope I did your husband proud.
Thank you, my friend. ❤
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You most definitely did! I can’t stop reading it!
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Music to my ears! ❤ ❤
I'll see you on tour.
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Front row!
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A great energetic piece. Full of attitude and self-belief. The way it should always be.
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thank you very much, my friend. I always appreciate your insight.
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‘Officially’ re-blogged!
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Thank you for the benevolence! Much appreciated.
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Spiffing good poem! Would make a natty set of song lyrics I reckon.
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This is an awesome compliment, thank you!
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A doff of the hat to you!
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Thank you, good Sir!
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Oh my gosh, I love this! I so relate to parts of it, too.
And just yesterday I heard Walk on Water for the first time, and I have it playing right now, actually!
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“..but only when it freezes” thank you! I always love it when you visit. Glad that I could write something that resonates with you 🙂
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Really? You made my day, thank you! And yes it did, it does.
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I’m also proudly an alumni of that school.
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I’ll save you a dance at our next reunion, Dickinson.
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😁
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Really a great post! You nailed it! I like your “Write what you know” also! However, just to be a smart ass, is that permission to stay where we are or might that also be, from a different viewpoint, an encouragement to increase what you know about life and other things? Just asking. See, know you’ve got me going. So, isn’t wisdom, even if from common sense and the street, learning from the life and mistakes of others so we don’t have to “Learn the Hard Way” by falling into the ditch they told us was there?? For me I have found that reading others writings helps me look at some things I know in a different light.
I think you might enjoy my “HAIKU: BREAKING RULES”
Chuck
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Hi, Chuck! I really appreciate your in depth review of this poem. And yes, it’s a different vista. I write for Sudden Denouement because its a forum of “divergent” literature. If I ONLY wrote what I knew then I would get bored out of my mind. I submerge in various genres, styles, collaborations, content etc
Thank you for reading! I’ll check out “Breaking Rules”
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Reblogged this on Brave and Reckless and commented:
A.G. Diedericks is in the house at Sudden Denouement
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“In the house” lol. Thank you for your devoted support ❤
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Of course my friend
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Love this A.G.– the rhythm and the picture of Eminem is perfect (and you didn’t make me feel too guilty about going to an ivy league school! If it makes you feel any better, social workers don’t get much respect at a place like Penn. Half the shit in the bookstore says “Wharton”) “punktuated by subversion” is simply brilliant. loved “I am an alumnus/from the college of sacrilege.”
Thank you for letting us see you.
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Thank you so much! It did feel quite liberating. And no! I have no issue with the alumni of academia. its aimed at elitists, only. The dunces who think it makes them any better than anyone else 🙂
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love it love it love it. so stylish and clever. ‘punktuated’… love that.
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Had to beat up a mail man to get “punktuated” in, cause I sent the poem days earlier without that autocorrect. Thanks so much for your warm compliment 🙂
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Reblogged this on lois e. linkens and commented:
brilliance from a. g.
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This is quite an honour for me. Thank you!
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Fantastic! I can hear Eminem rappin it out:)
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Then I’ve achieved my goal! Thanks AP 🙂
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You are very welcome.😉
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Love the rhythm and message (and Eminem)! Great job A.G.!
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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